You don't need to write a conclusion for IELTS writing task 1. You need to write an "overview" of the information.
你不需要为小作文写总结,但是你需要全面的概括下所有的信息
But why don't you need to write a conclusion? What's the difference between a conclusion and an overview?
为啥不要写总结呢?总结和概括有啥区别
First, a conclusion is really a final judgement, decision or opinion. This is perfect for the task 2 essay, but task 1 asks you to write a description without analysis or opinions. On the other hand, an "overview" is a simple description of the main points. It is a summary of the information shown in the graph or chart.
首先,结论是做出最终裁决,决定或意见。这对大作文来说是完美的,但小作文要求你写的,是不加分析或意见的说明。另一方面,“概述”是简单的描述要点。这是一个图形或图表中显示的信息摘要。
Second, a conclusion should be at the end of a piece of writing. An overview or general summary could go either at the end or near the beginning. Personally, I think it's a good idea to describe the main features of the graph or chart near the beginning of your essay.
其次,结论应该是在结尾一块书写。概述或总摘要可能在文章结尾或文章开始。就个人而言,我认为这是一个好主意,在文章的开始部分描述下图表的主要特点。
So, my suggested essay structure for task 1 looks like this:
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Introduction: what does the chart show?
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Overview / summary: what are the most noticeable features?
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Specific details: try to write 2 paragraphs.
建议的小作文结构:
段:介绍:图表描述了啥?
第二段:概括:最主要的特点是哪些?
第三段:试着去描述细节:试着写2段
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